I admire your work. Best Models sits proudly on my bookshelf, however this image is plain to me.

I have tried to analyse whether it is the standard posture of the model or the lack of interest generated through the background, however I believe it boils down to the lack of a story.

[link] This image of yours provokes questions into where she is, why does she need a hat without any other clothes.

[link] The setting for this image evokes that of a fairy tale. The surroundings to the girl offset her beauty with their stark degradation.

I find This image lacks those elements of story or questioning. Coupled with the pose not being particularly striking or flattering, it doesn't work for me.

Kind regards

Jb